J. Simon Harris’s Sir Gawain and the Green Knight

What follows is an extract from J. Simon Harris’s new translation of Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. You can read an interview with Josh about his translation in this issue

Excerpt from Fitt IV (lines 1998-2090)

NOW the New Year draws nigh, and the night passes,

and the day drives into the dark, as the Lord commands.

But the wild weather of the world awakened outside:

clouds had cast the cold keenly down to the earth,

with enough of the nip of the north to sting the naked skin;

the snow fell sullen and bitter, biting the beasts of the wild;

the whistling wind whipped down from on high

and filled every valley with vast snowdrifts.

The knight was listening close as he lay in his bed—

though his lids are closed, he sleeps little.

By each cock that crowed, he knew the hour.

Suddenly he sat up, before the day had dawned,

for the light of a lamp still gleamed in his chamber.

He called to his chamberlain, who quickly answered,

and he bid him to bring him his byrnie and saddle his steed.

The servant bustles about and brings him his outfit,

and he gets Sir Gawain geared up in splendid style.

First he clad him in his clothes to keep out the cold,

and then his equipment, which was carefully kept—

his paunce and his breastplate brightly polished,

the rings of his rich chainmail rocked of rust—

and all was as fresh as it was at first, and his gratitude was

            quite keen.

            He’d donned each sparkling piece,

            wiped to a shimmering sheen;

            the most gallant from here to Greece,

            he bade him bring his steed.


As he threw the finest threads on himself—

his surcoat with the sign of shining achievements

emblazoned on velvet, and virtuous stones

embedded all over the borders, and embroidered seams,

and a lining of fair fur from the finest pelts—

yet he did not leave the lace, the lady’s gift:

that Gawain did not forget, for his own good.

When he’d belted his blade on his bulging haunches,

he twined his true-love token twice about himself,

sweetly swaddled around his waist, that knight.

The girdle of green silk well suited that gallant hero,

such a rich display upon that royal red cloth.

But the warrior wasn’t wearing the girdle for its wealth,

nor for the pride of its pendants, polished though they were,

and though the glittering gold glinted upon the ends—

but rather to save himself, when it comes time to suffer,

to abide, without debate, the baleful blow of sword

            or knife.

            The bold knight, fully clad,

            comes swaggering outside,

            and thanks the noble lads

            profusely with delight.


Then Gringolet was geared up, that great big horse;

and having stayed in the stable, safe and sound,

that proud horse pined for the spur to gallop.

The man approaches his mount and inspects his face,

and he solemnly said, and swore by his oath,

“There are men in this castle with a mind for character!

May the prince who supports these people rejoice!

May the lovely lady be loved in the fullness of life!

When they cherish a guest out of goodness and charity,

when they hold honor in their hand, may the good Lord

of heaven on high reward them, as well as all of you!

And if I lead my life on earth for long enough,

I’ll compensate you somehow, if I can.”

Then he steps into the stirrup and saddles up.

His servant hands him his shield, which he slings on his shoulder.

He spurs Gringolet with his gilded heels,

and he starts over the stones, standing no longer

            to prance.

            His man was next to ride,

            bearing his spear and lance.

            “I trust this castle to Christ—

            may He give it fair chance.”


The bridge was drawn down, and the broad gates

unbarred and borne open on both sides.

He blessed himself quickly, and crossed the boards.

He praises the porter, who knelt before the prince

and gave him God and good day, that Gawain be saved.

And he went on his way with his one man

who would teach him the path to that perilous place

where he’s meant to receive the mournful stroke.

They passed by peaks where the boughs are bare;

they climbed by cliffs where the cold clings.

The heavens were high, but ugly and ominous.

Mist moistened the moors and melted on mountains;

each hill had a hat, a huge mantle of mist.

Brooks bubbled and broke on the banks about them,

cascading through cracks and crevices, shimmering down.

The way through the wood was wild and devious,

until it was soon time that the sun rises in that season

            of year.

            They’re on a mountainside,

            the white snow everywhere;

            the man he rode beside

            bid his master wait here.

An interview with Josh Simon Harris

JOSH SIMON HARRIS has recently completed a translation of the Middle English Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. Brazen Head poetry editor LIAM GUILAR asked him about it.

Tell us a little about your language background and your day job. What brings a scientist to translation? Which other texts have you translated, are translating?

I’ve always been interested in language and poetry; I wrote my first poems in third grade (I would have been about eight or nine years old), inspired by the great poets of my childhood like Dr. Seuss and Shel Silverstein. At the same time, I was always good at math as a kid, and when I took my first Physics classes in high school, I was blown away at how precisely the natural world can be described by mathematical models. In college, I kept up both interests; I was a double major in English and Materials Science and Engineering. It was there that I first fell into translation. I had taken a bit of Spanish, and I really liked Pablo Neruda’s poem, “Puedo escribir” (Poem 20 in his collection, Twenty Love Poems and a Song of Despair). I had heard it in Spanish without fully understanding all the words, and I was struck by how much better it sounded in Spanish than in translation. I wrote my own translation of it (which likewise doesn’t hold a candle to the Spanish original), and eventually translated the whole collection over the course of a summer (I wasn’t able to publish it until a few years later when it entered the public domain, and even now, it is only available in the United States due to copyright).

At some point in college, I also took a World Literature class where we read Homer and Dante, among other authors. I’ve had a fascination with Greek and Roman mythology ever since I was a kid (I used to love this book, D’Aulaires’ Book of Greek Myths, which is more or less Ovid for children; I’ve been reading it again with my son recently), so of course Homer and Dante pulled me right into the deep end. We talked in class about terza rima, the rhyme scheme of Dante’s Commedia, but the translation we were using didn’t rhyme at all. I thought it would be fun to write a translation in the original rhyme scheme, and my professor agreed to let me try my hand at the first canto instead of writing a final essay. I ended up translating the first five cantos. I didn’t know any Italian at the time, but I knew a little Spanish; and with a combination of online resources like Wiktionary and existing translations, I was able to pick it up readily enough. From there, I just got sucked in.

I had no idea what I was getting into, of course. To translate Dante, I essentially had to become an amateur Dante scholar. While translating, I read countless commentaries, essays, biographies, and translations of Dante’s other works and primary sources. It took me about ten years to finish the Inferno. During that time, I graduated college, wrote a novel based on the Greek tragedy Philoctetes (which probably about a dozen people have read), went to grad school for Computational Materials Science, met my ex-wife, had a kid, got married, got my PhD and got accepted for a postdoc position. Dante shadowed me through all these major milestones of my life; as Virgil guided Dante through the Inferno, so Dante guided me in my journey to become a better poet, translator and human being.

I can’t even explain how it felt when I finished the Inferno. It was like a breath of fresh air that is still somehow suffocating—relief and regret at the same time. I was about halfway through translating Dante’s Vita Nuova, a shorter, earlier work of prose and lyric poetry; but I had to get away from Dante for a while. I started translating Homer because I wanted to try writing in the epic hexameter (and became convinced that I could after reading Longfellow’s Evangeline). But the problem with the Iliad is that it is very, very long, and I also wanted a project that I could finish on a reasonable timeline. That, plus an interest in alliterative verse, is what led me to Sir Gawain and the Green Knight, and here we are. Along the way, I have also translated a lot of shorter poems from various languages and poets (Sappho, Bertran de Born, an anonymous Old English poet). I even translated a Norwegian short story for a contest (I didn’t win, but the translation that won was better than mine anyway). Now that I’m done with Gawain, I’ll get back to translating the Iliad, and I will eventually make my way back to Dante. I’m also working on a second novel, which is a science fiction story with inspiration from biblical mythology (sounds a bit like Dune when I put it that way, but it’s not).

Today, I’m still a scientist for my day job; I work at a small pharmaceutical company using AI and machine learning for drug discovery and toxicology (essentially making models to predict whether a molecule might be toxic or might have therapeutic effects). I remain intensely interested in science and mathematics, and for now it pays the bills better than poetry. But creative writing and science are both deeply ingrained in my soul. I’ll always do both.

Why alliterative verse? And while we’re here were you ever tempted to translate Sir Gawain or Saint Erkenwald into another, perhaps more modern verse form?

Verse form is one of my favorite things about poetry. Even in free verse, form is what distinguishes poetry from prose. Part of the fun of translation, for me, is the challenge of translating a poem into a new language while keeping the verse form intact. With Dante, it was terza rima; with Homer, it’s dactylic hexameter; and with Gawain, it’s alliterative verse (and the “bob and wheel” at the end of each stanza, of course). I became interested in alliterative verse purely for this reason. I translated a short Old English alliterative poem, “The Wanderer,” and I really enjoyed it; alliteration requires a different kind of mindset from meter and rhyme. After writing a lot of alliterative verse, I also noticed how prevalent alliteration is in our language and in a lot of my favorite books (Tolkien is a great example).

I haven’t really been tempted to translate Gawain or Erkenwald into another verse form, but I think it’s a really interesting idea. This is essentially what Pope did with Homer (he translated Homer into heroic couplets). Likewise, Dante translated the Lord’s Prayer into Italian in terza rima in order to fit it into the Comedy. There are a couple of Sappho poems that I’ve translated into a different form than the original, essentially because there is no good English equivalent of their original meter; it is kind of fun to try to fit a poem into a new box in that way. So I think it’s worth considering.

Why Sir Gawain? From your Introduction it seems you hadn’t read the poem before you started translating it? Is that correct? And how did you feel about the poem when you’d finished? Impressed? Disappointed?

That’s right. I had heard of Sir Gawain, and I knew other people who had read it, but I had never read it myself before I started translating it. As I mentioned, I had already done an alliterative verse translation of “The Wanderer,” and I really wanted to try a longer alliterative poem. The obvious choice in Old English would be Beowulf, but I was never a big fan of Beowulf, so I wasn’t thrilled at the prospect of devoting a chunk of my life to it. Besides, Seamus Heaney’s translation of Beowulf is pretty much as good as it is ever going to get, in my opinion (I really love the poetry in his version, even though I find the narrative kind of dull). So Old English was out. What about Middle English? I did a bit of research into alliterative poetry, and the general consensus seemed to be that Sir Gawain and the Green Knight was the best alliterative poem in Middle English. I didn’t read the poem first, I just took a leap of faith and started translating. I was kind of looking for something quick and easy after working with Dante and Homer, and I thought a Middle English Arthurian romance would be sort of a light and fun adventure. I wasn’t expecting great depth and complexity—man, was I surprised. The poem was way, way more impressive than I thought it would be; it exceeded my expectations in almost every way. The Gawain poet is deeply concerned with form and symmetry, and it comes across in each line, each stanza, the structure of the poem as a whole, and the structure of the narrative. On top of that, his characters (particularly Gawain and the lady of the castle, whom he meets) have rich inner minds in a way that is unusual for old Arthurian tales; the poet explores emotion and psychology in surprisingly modern ways. So I think it’s fair to say I was impressed.

How do you translate? What’s your process? Is translating Gawain different from how you might approach Homer?

My translation process has evolved over time, and it is definitely different depending on the text. With Dante and Homer, I first translate the original text word by word into a kind of pidgin language with English words but the original syntax; the pidgin language reads like a kind of code, with symbols indicating certain things to me about the original language. To do this, I use a combination of online dictionaries (Wiktionary is a good general resource with etymologies, etc.; and there are specific dictionaries for Ancient Greek and Middle English), plus other resources if there is a unique word or context that is unclear or perplexing. With Dante, I’m also reading Singleton’s commentary while writing the pidgin translation, keeping notes on anything relevant (e.g. if Dante’s word choice alludes to something famous, I want my word choice to do the same). With Homer, I’m checking for repetition, because I want to make sure that if Homer repeats a phrase verbatim, I do the same (repetition is very important in Homer, since it derives from semi-improvised oral poetry). After completing the pidgin-language version, I go through and write my translation in verse (still referring to the original text as well as the pidgin text, and often consulting other translations and commentaries).

With Gawain, because the original language is Middle English, I don’t bother with writing the pidgin text first. When you get the hang of it, you can more or less read big chunks of the Middle English text without a dictionary; I still look up most of the words, since the meaning of several words has changed over the centuries, but it is easier for me to scan through than Italian or Ancient Greek. As I write, I also consult other translations and commentaries to make sure I’m getting the correct meaning (and not missing any subtext or anything). So the common thread of my translation process is that I am essentially close-reading the text as I write, looking up each word individually while considering the passage as a whole.

Were there parts of the story that gave you problems, were more difficult to translate, made you wish you could do a little editing?

Oh, there were many. Sometimes, especially with Middle English (where the words can often be quite close to Modern English), you find yourself just rolling along without any problems. But when you bump into a challenging passage, you might be stuck for a day or longer trying to find a solution. It’s hard for me to think of specific examples after the fact, though. I ended up happy with most of the alliterative lines, because there is a lot of freedom to render them in different ways. If there are some rough edges on the translation, they would probably be in the “bob and wheel” sections, the five lines of rhyming verse at the end of each stanza. Those lines can be very difficult to translate, given the short lines combined with the tight rhyme scheme. As always, translation is a compromise between several conflicting ideals.

Were there any parts of the original that I wished were different? Of course. While the poem is surprisingly modern, the medieval sensibilities of its author often show up in unexpected ways. But it’s not my job as a translator to edit the original, it is my job to bring it into Modern English. So I stayed as faithful as I could to the original text.

Gordon and Tolkien in their introduction to their edition of the poem thought the story was almost perfect but the three hunting episodes were excessive. What do you think of them?

On my first reading, I might have agreed that the three hunting scenes were excessive—after all, the same sequence of five scenes is essentially repeated three times in a row: the lord goes hunting, the lady tries to seduce Gawain, the lord’s men carve up their quarry, Gawain and the lord exchange spoils, and finally, Gawain and the lord renew the terms of their game. But when I was working on the notes, I realized that this repetition of five scenes mimics the shape of the pentagram (a five-pointed star): to draw a pentagram, you draw a sequence of five overlapping lines, and the fifth line brings you back to the start. The pentagram is thematically important to the narrative—it is represented on Gawain’s coat of arms, and the poet links it explicitly to Gawain’s virtues (he calls it a “token of truth”). The poet very cleverly mirrors the structure of the pentagram in the structure of his verse. But the thrice-repeated sequence of scenes is not exactly the same each time; there is a progression in which Gawain’s virtue slowly breaks down, and at the end of it the structure of the pentagram is broken too. I talk about this in more detail in the notes, of course.

What is your take on the ending? Gawain is mortified and thinks he’s failed. The people at Arthur’s court reject this and insist on wearing what he thinks is a badge of shame as a badge in his honour. What do you think?

I love the ending. I think it is an uplifting reminder of the importance of being part of a supportive community. In the first half of the poem, Gawain does not grow as a character—he is presented as a knight already at the peak of perfection (in terms of chivalric virtue, anyway). He readily trades his own life for his king’s, he bravely goes on a quest that will almost certainly end in peril for him, and he defeats ogres and dragons along the way as if they were a mere inconvenience. But nobody is perfect. The poet puts Gawain in a situation where even his chivalric virtues cannot sustain him, and Gawain fails. It is a small failure, really, but he takes it hard. When he comes home, he confesses everything to Arthur and his courtiers; but instead of shaming him, they completely turn it on its head. His imperfection is not shameful, it is only human; his shame is excused by the mere fact that he is ashamed, that he continues to strive to be virtuous. Perfection may be the ideal of knighthood, but no knight is perfect in practice.

How would you sell your translation to a possible buyer? What will they get from your translation they can’t get from any of the existing ones?

Probably the biggest thing that distinguishes my translation from others is that I adhere to the original form of the poem using natural-sounding language (not using awkward diction, syntax inversions, etc.), while still staying true to the meaning of the text. The verse form of the Middle English original is really interesting: each stanza consists of (on average) twenty lines of alliterative verse, capped off by a short five-line rhyming section. Other translators have certainly carried this verse form into Modern English; but often they sacrifice clarity, or a good word choice, or (worse) the mood of the poem in order to pull it off (I certainly don’t want to judge too harshly; there are a number of good translations already out there). Not that I never make any sacrifices; translation is all about making choices to balance the meaning, form, and emotion of the original text. But I like to think that my translation strikes a pretty good balance.

Additionally, I have included lots of goodies besides the poem itself. Instead of line-by-line notes (which are common enough in translations of classic poetry), I opted to write commentary in the form of a conversational essay in which I’m walking through the poem along with the reader. I analyze the text of course, but also provide some historical background, discussion of the poetics, etc., in relevant places as I go along; I think readers who enjoy the poem will find the commentary interesting and worthwhile. I also have a bibliography intended more for readers and enthusiasts than scholars; a pronunciation glossary with names, places, and medieval titles, arms and armor; King Arthur’s family tree; a timeline of the narrative; a historical timeline of events relevant to the poem; and several hand-drawn images (a map of Gawain’s journey through England and Wales, a drawing showing the armor of a medieval knight, and more). Finally, I’ve capped off the book with an original poem which has a rather interesting verse structure (it’s complicated, but it is based on the shape of the pentagram, which is central to the themes of the narrative). There’s also a link in the back of the book to a project I’m working on, which is a “choose your own adventure”-style version of Sir Gawain and the Green Knight (I’m putting it online as I write it; it is not nearly complete yet).

Your book has an extensive section of commentary and notes. What do you think a reader will learn from them that is new?

Most works of classic literature have editions with notes or commentary, but I’ve found that the commentary is sometimes rather dry and uninteresting to anyone but scholars (this is certainly not always the case, but it is common enough). I wanted to keep my own commentary engaging throughout. When I’m out driving or doing chores, I like to listen to podcasts that walk through narrative poems, films and video games while providing commentary and analysis along the way. Inspired by that format, I wrote my notes in something of a conversational style; I basically walk through the narrative discussing everything I find interesting along the way. I consulted the notes of several different Gawain translations as well as online resources to ensure I didn’t miss anything important. My commentary is designed so that it can be read on its own after reading the poem, without flipping back and forth to see what lines I’m referring to. In this way, I get to do a close reading of the poem with the reader. I’m not familiar enough with the full body of Gawain scholarship to know how novel my commentary really is, but it isn’t meant to be a work of rigorous scholarship anyway. I can say with confidence that there’s a lot that you won’t find in the notes of other translations. Above all, I think (I hope) readers will find it interesting and thought-provoking.

The poet is anonymous but generally regarded as one of the great poets of Middle English. You’ve spent a long time in his company. Do you have a sense of ‘The Gawain Poet’? 

The Gawain poet lived in the late fourteenth century in the northwest part of the English Midlands (scholars deduce this from his dialect). He has a strong voice and occasionally inserts himself into the narrative, providing a little clarification or observation in first person. He’s obviously intelligent and well-read, and he seems to have a good deal of familiarity with matters of both church and court. On the one hand, he is learned in Latin, theology, and ecclesiastical rites, suggesting an education in the Church; on the other, he displays an intimate knowledge of chivalry and courtly affairs, suggesting some role in the English court. And yet, he doesn’t seem like a man tied too tightly to the cloth or the crown; he doesn’t shy away from low language and bawdy humor, and he seems unusually attuned to the inner minds and outward concerns of people from many different backgrounds. As a historical person, he is an enigmatic figure; and yet, his personality often shines through in his writing. He is passionate, curious, fair-minded, empathetic, intelligent, and a deep thinker in all sorts of subject areas. He’s funny when he wants to be, and somber when he needs to be. Overall, he’s just a fantastic writer. So yes, I feel like I do have a sense of who the Gawain poet is—even if, paradoxically, we may never know his true identity.

I just want to say thank you for giving me the opportunity to discuss my translation of Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. I spent a lot of time working on this in solitude, so it’s wonderful to finally share it with other people. Thank you!

Publication information

Sir Gawain and the Green Knight

Anonymous, J. Simon Harris (translation and commentary)

Nostra Vita Books

To be published 9 November 2026

Translations from Mandelstam

ALISTAIR NOON’s recent publications include Paradise Takeaway (Two Rivers, 2023 https://tworiverspress.com/shop/paradise-takeaway/) and two further volumes of his translations from the Russian of Osip Mandelstam (The Voronezh Workbooks and Occasional and Joke Poems, Shearsman, 2022). His poems, reviews and translations have appeared in Poetry Wales, Poetry Review, the Guardian and New Statesman, and he’s published essays on translocality and poetry, Wuhan Punk and the fall of the Berlin Wall. Two Verse Essays is available from Longbarrow Press
https://longbarrowpress.com/current-publications/alistair-noon/
He lives in Berlin.

In 1930, Politburo member Nikolai Bukharin arranged for the Russian poet OSIP MANDELSTAM (1891-1938) to take a trip of several months to the Soviet Caucasus, most of which was spent in Armenia. The trip kickstarted Mandelstam’s poetry again, which had been in hiatus for five years, not least due to political pressure and the narrowing of publication opportunities. A number of poems Mandelstam wrote during or after the trip were not included in the “Armenia” cycle itself but retained in the manuscripts he and his wife, Nadezhda, kept for possible future publication. These are translated here.

Translations from Mandelstam

Scratching out words from the Ararat valley,
Armenian’s like a wild cat,
a clawlike language of mudbrick cities,
the speech of hungering bricks.

The sky is shah, but the shah’s short-sighted,
its turquoise blind from birth:
it still can’t read that hollowed volume
of clay baked hard with dark blood.

October 1930

I love this land that strains
to give birth, that dozes and cries,
this nation nailed to its terrain,
the centuries mere years in its eyes.

How beautiful everything sounds
in your ear that patrols the frontier,
where the stinking ragwort surrounds
the mustard hush that reigns here…

October 1930

That feral cat, Armenian speech,
plays with me, scratches my ears till they’ve bled,
gives me a fever. You evil creature!
Let me doze off on this humpbacked bed!

Down from the ceiling tumble the glow-worms.
Flies crawl over the sodden terrain
of the sheet. Battalions of long-legged birds
march in platoons over yellowing plains.

Fearsome inspector, face like a mattress,
truly pathetic and superrepellent,
short of a pass and yet they dispatched you
into Armenian steppes – what the hell?

They told you to kindly remove your butt:
“No one needs your sort round here! Get lost!”
Head of a Desk, you’d taken your cut,
were once with the Guards, but the spit washed off.

“Look who’s here!” you boom at the door.
But like two girls out hunting mushrooms,
we won’t have to wait too long before
we find good coffins to put in our tombs…

Once we were people. Now we talk piffle –
what would you say is our service grade? –
condemned to a final stitch in the ribs
and a poet’s bunch of Erzurum grapes.

October 1930

Where pifflers howl like beasts in the wild,
and beasts are like people, unleashing their tricks,
short of a pass, dispatched like an exile
bound to a cart, in a sorceror’s power,
the inspector headed for Erzurum sips
Chernomor’s wine at a tavern gone sour.

October 1930

As we crossed the mountain pass
up high on the Muslim side,
Death topped up our glasses.
We’d cantered out of a nightmare

in the hands of a charioteer
the sun had baked like a plum,
a local devil for hire
and monosyllabically glum:

“Tso!” As we gathered pace,
he croaked on down the road,
a Bedouin hiding his face
like a rose perhaps, or a toad.

His hideous features concealed
in a leather mask, he forced
the ponies pulling our wheels
onwards until he was hoarse.

We felt his haste, felt the jolts,
and every roadside stop
spun like the passing chariots.
No road led down from the top.

“Damn it!” I cried, wide awake,
“Stop here!” I screamed at the back
of this chairman mad with the plague
and headed down the wrong track!

With a whoop, he cracked the wire reins,
that noseless horseman: we felt
the sweet and sour terrain
turn like a carousel.

These were the terrors that found
their way right into my soul
in Shusha, the fortress town
that wolves and vultures controlled –

a cocoon no human sound
rang through, a grave in the mountains.
Dead windows all around
were visible by the thousand,

the houses’ soft pink walls
standing shamelessly naked.
And over them hung the pall
of the sky, as blue as the plague.

12 June 1931

Paradise Takeaway available from Two Rivers Press
https://tworiverspress.com/shop/paradise-takeaway/
Two Verse Essays available from Longbarrow Press
https://longbarrowpress.com/current-publications/alistair-noon/

Sine ulla querella

JULIE STEINER is the pseudonym of a recovering classicist in San Diego, California. Her recent work appears in The Classical Outlook, The Ekphrastic Review, Snakeskin, Light, Lighten Up Online, and The Asses of Parnassus. See more on her Substack ‘Off-Piste on Mount Parnassus’ (offpisteonmountp.substack.com).

SINE ULLA QUERELLA — “without any complaint whatsoever”

Phrase on a 1590 memorial plaque mounted next to the door into the Hall of Confessions, adjoining the Basilica of St. Anthony of Padua.

While waiting for an English-speaking priest

to come and comprehend what Mom confessed,

I passed the hours by trying to digest

a stone. The man it honored was deceased,

but buried elsewhere — praised, not rest-in-peaced.

The Latin called this personage the best

of lords (as most such cenotaphs attest),

but also hailed his lady as the least

of battle-axes (as I paraphrased):

with no complaint at all in twenty-five

years of marriage, testified the stone.

“A miracle,” my mom agreed, amazed

that both had somehow managed to survive

so long, if his decisions ruled alone.


Online, I checked my on-the-fly translation,

having learned the hard way to be wary

of Englishing without a dictionary.

As I had feared, my quick interpretation

was flawed, and needed hasty emendation:

“I goofed. It’s true that this obituary

was placed here by his wife, but not to carry

a boast about her silent subjugation:

her non-complaint was evidence of his

attentiveness. Incomparable spouse,

she also wrote of him. That’s very sweet.

And still miraculous.” Mom laughed, “It is,

but I prefer the autocrat-and-mouse

scenario, so that’s what I’ll repeat.”


I bite my rodent tongue. I know the drill:

when inconvenient data is revealed,

my mom’s reality-distortion field

allows her to believe, by force of will,

whatever she would like to. It’s a skill —

a superpower — I’ve often heard her wield.

The version of events that’s most appealed

to her has always been her gospel. Still,

I’m five years old again, and flabbergasted,

whenever Mom deliberately lies.

And now she’ll use my own mistake to shatter

this touching limestone tribute, which has lasted

since 1590. I apologize

to Truth, in case my penitence might matter.

NOTE

“The expression sine (ulla) querella is well attested in sepulchral inscriptions so that one might suspect that it had become a hackneyed formula devoid of real meaning.”

—R.E.A. Palmer in the Bryn Mawr Classical Review (http://bmcr.brynmawr.edu/1994/94.03.06.html)

Below is the translator’s transcription of the limestone cenotaph that is mounted on the west wall of the Magnolia Cloister, to the right of the door into the Hall of Confessions, adjoining the Basilica of St. Anthony of Padua.

·D· ·O· ·M·

[Deo optimo maximo, “to the god [that is] most good and most great”,is the standard Classical dedication to Jove/Jupiter. This abbreviation begins many Christian inscriptions in Italy.]

RENATO · VALLIO · STORSII · DOMINO ·

ILLVSTRI · APVD · GALLOS · LOCO · NATO ·

HENRICI · III · GALLIARVM · ET · POLONIAE ·

REGIS · A · CONSILIIS · OECONOMO · ATQ[VE] · APVD ·

KAROLVM · EMANVELEM · SABAVDIAE · DVCEM ·

QVADRIENNIVM · INTERNVNCIO · VIRO · PROBO ·

ET · PRVDENTI · QVI · POST · REGIS · NECEM · VT ·

BELLORVM · CIVILIVM · PATRIAM · DEVASTANTIVM ·

MISERRIMVM · SPECTACVLVM  EVITARET ·

AVGVSTA · TAVRINORVM · PATAVIVM · CVM ·

SECESSISSET · ARDENTI · FEBRE · CORREPTVS ·

LIIII · AETATIS · SVAE · ANNO · VITAM · CVM · MORTE ·

COMMVTAVIT · MAGDALENA  ALBASPINEA

CONIVGI · INCOMPARABILI · CVM · QVO · VIXIT ·

ANNOS · XXV · SINE  VLLA · QVERELLA ·

PRO · TEMPORE · P · C · [poni curavit = “caused (this memorial) to be placed”— another standard formula in dedicatory inscriptions; sometimes refers to the building, not just the plaque]

OBIIT · DIE · XIII · MARTII · ANN[O] · M · D · XC ·

To God, the most good, the most great: on behalf of René Duval, of Stors [in the Oise Valley, close to Paris], an illustrious lord among the French in his birthplace; chief advisor of Henry III, King of the French and of Poland [1551-1589], and for four years his diplomatic agent at the house of Charles Emmanuel, Duke of Savoy [1562-1630, first cousin of Henry III, based in Turin]; [Duval was] a virtuous man, and a prudent one, who, when he had retired from Turin to Padua after the assassination of the king [August 2, 1589], in order to avoid the civil wars—an extremely lamentable scene, devastating his homeland—was seized by a burning fever. In the 54th year of his life, he exchanged life for death. Madeleine de L’Albépine erected this monument for her incomparable spouse, with whom she had lived for 25 years without any complaint whatsoever during that time.

He died the 13th day of March in the year 1590.

Three poems by Tim Miller

TIM MILLER’s latest book of poetry, Time and the River: From Columbine to the Invention of Fire, was just published by S4N Books. His poetry has appeared in Crannóg, Southword, Londongrip, Forgotten Ground Regained, and others across the US and UK. He is online at wordandsilence.com and can be heard on the poetry podcast Human Voices Wake Us.

London, 1943

She grew plants in her room all through the war,

she moved her books into the sitting room

and surrounded herself with plants that shook

during the Blitz as they climbed their trellises,

shook in their pots or smoothed themselves between

her fingers on nights when she wrote to him,

fingering philodendron after each

sentence and sometimes the entire night,

when there was nothing or too much to say.

She wrote about slicing matches in half

to conserve them, and the bombed cricket pitch,

of running out of cooking fat and eggs

and how proud she was of her dirty hands

and the days she spent at the factory.

She promised him that when the war was done

she would wrap herself in his overcoat,

the coat that was the war to him, the coat

that carried him across the continent.

She knew that if she found some real silk hose

it would drive him mad, that and a midnight blue

Rayon dress – but to touch his olive coat,

belted behind, and tug at his loose tie,

wide and patterned beneath his graying beard –

that would mean the end of the war for her.

Their letters to each other ended with

the same verses from Billie Holiday’s

“Solitude,” and if one of them was killed

they promised to hide in each instrument –

buried in the bass and in Billie’s voice,

buried in the trumpet and piano –

for the other to find and listen to.

But somehow she knew they would both survive

to dance to that song together, surrounded

in this room by her wide leaves, the full moon

no longer a danger and his body

gone so long from her life – and now just there.

So she also knew that by then the song

wouldn’t be about them anymore but

all the war dead they hadn’t acknowledged,

all buried in the inflection of the

tenor saxophone, and the soft mercy

in the drums, finally mercy and rest,

the kind of rest neither of them would know

until the memory of an old song

made them wonder what it was all about,

they had been so busy living again.

Shtetl, 1803

This siddur is for travelers, it’s tiny,

and I still use it when I return home

since even there I am passing through.

I carry this book the same way I bring

bread – by horseback, train, or on the river –

I lug around these crumbs with my warm book

and after a morning selling hand mills

and tableware, boots and chess sets and combs,

I find a corner table in Frankfurt,

I find a window wherever I am,

and that’s my only chance to pray. I can’t

bow or sing or gesture in such a place,

but I do read and I do sway slightly,

and since I was made to leave yeshiva

it must be enough. It’s not where I rest

but it’s when I can stop, still unsettled,

and I have this siddur, I have my bread.

In the morning, people buy what I have,

or they don’t – silks, shoelaces, paper, scarves –

and then I steal some minutes in Breslau,

steal the vivid and true habits of life

in Warsaw or Brody, bits of regret

wrestled away and handed over to

bread and prayer and companionless silence,

thick bread and a thick book carried for miles,

the only order I can hope to keep.

Notes to ‘Shetl 1803’

Shtetl: Yiddish for a market town in Eastern Europe

Siddur: A Jewish prayerbook

Yeshiva: While this a general term for a Jewish school, in the context of the poem (Eastern Europe, late 18th/early 19th century), it refers specifically to those schools started by members of Hasidism, itself a new (and beleaguered) movement within Judaism at the time

Cleveland, 1988

I remember him in his Celtics coat,

one of the other dads at Saturday

morning basketball games. I seem to see

him in the hall near the gymnasium,

back by the kitchen where the old women

sold popcorn and soda and snacks, or with

the crowd around the court – parents, siblings,

or the look of new kids from across town

that often came with the visiting team.

He was tall and he always wore that green coat,

and he looked so much like Kevin McHale –

that’s the name I want to use now – and if

you wanted you could follow his green shape

all the way from the snowy entrance off

the parking lot, past the ticket-taker,

around the court of maybe a hundred

adults and kids all gathered for the squeals

of sneakers on the floor, the ref’s whistle

and the drama of what mattered so much:

grade school, late eighties, Saturday morning.

The more I write about him in this way

the more I seem to see him as a ghost,

and it was only twenty years later

that I heard he was a narcotics cop,

that he’d been under investigation

and had shot himself in front of the chief.

I instantly remembered those mornings

and wondered if anyone else did, too,

his shape heavy and loitering in our

memories like the restless dead, regret

somewhere back there, some decision the snow

or hallways or hunched walk of a tall man

gave no hint of. Was guilt on his shoulders

even then? I don’t know, I was caught up

playing myself, and never very good,

proud of my first pair of Nikes and the

scuff marks, like this ink, that they left behind.

The Night Accountant

PAUL J. PASTOR is an Executive Editor for Nelson Books, a widely-published poet, and the winner of the 2025 J.F. Powers Prize in Fiction. He is the author of several books, most recently The Locust Years: Poems and The Crystal Hand: Poems. He lives in Oregon.

The Night Accountant

On the prime and unmown grass

(This veritable grass of mine), 

I watched the fair, unsparing moon

Slide like a pearl on fishing line.


Barefoot in the bowing grass

(And baptized with its seven dews), 

I heard the dark Night’s abacus,

And counted what we have to lose.

Black Sea & Moments at an English Church

GARY BILLS was born at Wordsley, near Stourbridge, UK. He gained his MA in Creative Writing at Birmingham City University, with a distinction. He has been nominated three times for a Pushcart Prize, and he has three full collections to his name. His work has been translated into German, Romanian and Italian. 

Black Sea

Those dead ships in abysmal sleep

where time and shipworm cannot bite

and even snows of flesh and slime

which elsewhere ghost it down from light 

can never reach this other deep

where oil-less lamps on Punic prows

are waiting for the taper’s touch,

though all the crews are sift by now

or swimming in the eyeless mind.

But when Man’s dreams are kindled bright

the fish is startled in its flight,

to glimpse the ports he left behind.

Moments at an English Church

Time preserves its monuments of quiet –

the marble baby, wailing from her crib

in perfect silence – rumpling up her face


And pudgy cherubs flutter round a name

with virgin crants for James, who died a teen,

white ribbons for his purity and grace.  


A bishop waves his devils’ book and frowns –

(his bald head’s like a marble on a ruff…)

but after all, this was his solemn place.


Outside the seeds are spinning from the limes –

past saints who float in frames of staining glass,

presenting shells and swords and martyrs’ crowns.



The church clock with its oil of resurrection

turns the cogs to keep the dead alert,

slowly, slowly building to the chimes.

Eternal Return & Winter Windstorm

ANDREW SHIELDS lives in Basel, Switzerland. His collection of poems Thomas Hardy Listens to Louis Armstrong was published by Eyewear in June 2015. His band Human Shields released the album Somebody’s Hometown in 2015 and the EP Défense de jouer in 2016. His poems have recently appeared online in Talking About Strawberries, Delta Poetry Review, London Grip, and Oddball Magazine.

Eternal Return

Every morning, she says she needs

a vacation. Not even a second coffee

can make her alert enough to have

a shot at making it through the day

without a yawn or three. After lunch

she drinks another just before she

takes a nap that sometimes lasts

two hours, and then she feels like

the last dinosaur before extinction

until evening, when she cannot sleep.

Winter Windstorm

On this bitter night, the wind has brought

North Sea storms to my window,

where they plead for entrance.


I lie still in the dark and listen

to their arguments, which would convince

no one to allow them entry.


But though I refuse them an audience,

they will not go away, even if

my attention is distracted by dreams.


I will hear their dead voices calling

until the day disperses them, until

the wind takes itself and them away.

The Presence & A Crowded Wood

ANDREW BRENZA is the author of the hybrid novel WRYTHM (Montag) and the visual poetry collections Colorways (Anhinga) and Smear (BlazeVOX). His speculative, formal poetry has appeared in or is forthcoming from Strange Horizons, The Lyric, The Orchards, Blue Unicorn, Spectral Realms, Space & Time Magazine, Bewildering Stories, Dark Horses, The Dawntreader and Altered Reality.

The Presence 

Venus, Auriga and the crescent moon 

Westward jeweled horizon’s sinking crown. 

But earthshine haunted like an ancient rune 

The filmy darkness of an eye so bound, 


And bade the draping shadows’ lightless dance 

That quickened clement blood to wild storm, 

Whose conjured stillness from an eyeless glance 

Tempted formless presence to the verge of form. 

A Crowded Wood 

Beneath a grate of autumn clouds, I stood 

Breathless as a stone, in a crowded wood, 

Among the dusty litter of the leaves 

That blanketed the roots of barren trees. 


And still I sang of winter’s coming pall  

As though the dead could sing themselves to sleep; 

And so I made a feather of the fall 

Where prying death and time go plunging deep. 

Verse modesty

Liberality and Modesty, by Guido Reni

Talking to Skeletons

David Dumouriez, Liverpool: erbacce-press, 90pps., £10

The third poem in David Dumouriez’s collection is titled ‘POETRY IS WANK.’ It’s printed in capitals, runs two pages, and closes on the line “POETRY WILL NEVER NOT BE WANK.” Provocation or confession, it sets the terms for the book: eighty-odd pages from a poet who refuses, on the surface, to take poetry seriously, and who is, all the same, very good at it.

Talking to Skeletons ranges from English childhood to Istanbul, and the mixture is as eclectic as that suggests. There are elegies and satires, love poems, a walking tour of a childhood town, political rants, an ode to Cary Grant’s suit in North by Northwest, and a two-line poem about a curry. The voice is colloquial (sometimes too much so), sardonic, and almost religiously allergic to pretension. Rather than the elevated register, Dumouriez reaches for the pub, the bus stop, the snooker club. He is suspicious of anyone who takes themselves too seriously — himself included.

For me the collection’s finest moment is ‘51° 30′ N, 0° 25′ E,’ a long walking tour of a small English town that slowly turns into an elegy for a vanished self. Dumouriez takes us past polling stations, dog walks, rusted goalposts, a toyshop run by a Polish man, a church where he and a friend once tried to summon a thunderbolt by swearing at the threshold. The imagery is specific and unhurried: “Another postbox. Focal point back then. / Not sure now.” The accumulation of observed detail makes the place feel at once ordinary and irreplaceable. Memory, class and mortality converge without any of them being announced. And somehow the combination works.

‘Reading Kipling by Candlelight’ is one of the more personal poems in the book, and the one I found easiest to climb inside. Set during the 1999 Istanbul earthquake, it follows the speaker through a night of confusion. He mistakes the tremor for a burglar, goes back to sleep while the parks fill with frightened residents, and only in the morning grasps the scale of what he slept through. It’s funny and quietly unsettling at once. Dumouriez has an instinct for the exact detail that lifts an anecdote into something more: “Myself and one old woman, two floors up, / remained at home. My flaws you’ll find described. / As for her, perhaps she’d given up on life.” That last line does something the earlier stanzas don’t prepare you for. Death has entered what had been, up to that point, largely a comic story. And then life shrugs and moves on.

Talking to Skeletons is at its strongest when the humor and the grief run in parallel. ‘An Anglican Event’ opens with “My mother lies before us in a box, / to put it blunt,” and proceeds to take a funeral apart with deadpan precision: the vicar who “styles himself as ‘Father Tim,’” the embarrassed congregants working through hymns they haven’t sung since school, the curtain that makes it real. ‘Ex of England’ pulls off something similar with a grandfather’s hoarded possessions and an unidentified Victorian portrait heading for a bonfire. The joke in these poems does not push the grief aside; it comes out of the same material.

Dumouriez is most interesting when he runs into something that resists him: a death, a memory, a place, the stubborn survival of affection. When the sardonic voice has something to push against, the friction produces complexity. He is less interesting when he already knows what he thinks before the poem starts.

The smaller provocations don’t all land. The opening of ‘Sonnets from the Portuguese, 43 (revised)’ – “How can I fuck thee? Let me count the ways” – is genuinely funny and technically competent parody. But some of the shorter satirical pieces (‘Addendum,’ ‘Laid Back, Laid Under,’ ‘The Poetry is in the Potty’) read more like social-media wit than poems. Set beside ‘51° 30′ N, 0° 25′ E’ and ‘Reading Kipling,’ they sound a dissonant note. Dumouriez knows the difference between a poem and a punchline. He just prints the punchline anyway from time to time.

The unevenness points to a larger issue. Across the eighty-odd pages, subjects and attitudes recur – death, aging, literary pretension, cultural irritation – and a handful of the lighter pieces work against the stronger ones nearby rather than for them. A shorter book might have been a stronger one. That said, the excess is clearly a part of how Dumouriez writes, forever spotting something else that seems to want a joke or an elegy.

I come to the book as a poet who works mainly in formal verse and in two languages – about as far from Dumouriez’s aesthetic as one can reasonably get. What I hadn’t expected was how little the distance ended up mattering. Talking to Skeletons isn’t really asking to be identified with; it’s asking for a reader willing to be amused, provoked, and every so often caught off guard – the anecdote that opens onto mortality, the joke that turns without warning into grief.

Which is also, I think, why the opening declaration eventually defeats itself. For all the mockery of poetry and poets and gatekeepers (and his own reasons for writing), Dumouriez’s best poems rely on the one thing “POETRY IS WANK” pretends to distrust: the idea that arranging words carefully might preserve something that would otherwise vanish. That a poet who opens with “POETRY IS WANK” also writes “51° 30′ N, 0° 25′ E” is, in the end, the strongest argument against his own thesis.